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PostSubject: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 9:37 am

Name of your character: Ericnox

Race: Saiyan

Power level: 60,000.

Appearance:
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(OOC notes, remove the scar upon his forehead. I suck at photo editing, otherwise I would have done it.)

Background: Ericnox was a mid ranked Saiyan warrior. He was nothing special. His family was also mid to low ranked warriors. His blood line doesn't show any grand warriors, or heroes of legend, simply front line fighters who are dedicated to the cause of the Empire.

Being raised planet side, he was prone to getting into battles with other warriors, both stronger and weaker than himself. He didn't care while he was in training, all battles could be enjoyed. He had long known of the power of the Oozaru, and wanted to find another way to tap into the power it held without transforming by the full moon. He was working on something to do this when the young warrior was contacted by the PTF (Planet Trade Federation) and sent him off with a quick mission to clean up after a crew had left. Hardly a teenager at this point, he was brash and cocky, rushing out face his foes knowing next to nothing.

When the crew arrived to pick him up three days later, he was messed up but it was nothing the healing chambers couldn't fix. The remainder of the life on the planet was gone, and they could start the process of selling it. The world wasn't too bad off in terms of damage, but it wouldn't turn over a full profit due to some of the damage on it.

After his healing, he was moved to the position he is in now. The Cryo-statis and long sleep. King Vegeta had picked him for his loyal nature towards the Empire first. Sleeping though many of the events that happened in the universe, the fight against the humans, the battles on Namek, the defeat of Freeza, and the ki alteration of the universe.

Being awakened from his long slumber, his eyes fell upon the others as they had awakened. He was among the last batch to get out into the light, and start working on the world. A quick check over from the medics deemed him fit for nearly anything he wished to do, which made him smile as he moved out of the ice caps and into the world as a whole.

His personality as a whole is what one would expect from a Saiyan warrior. Brash, confident, quick to learn and adapt, and most of all... Cocky. He doesn't much care for those who stay out of battles, but he wonders about why they do it. Healers are one thing, they are always improving their abilities upon those who do fight, but the scientists, the people who outright refuse to fight, even when backed into a corner. Those kind of people drive him insane. Beyond this, the rest is a mystery... For now!


Techniques:
Death Beam - is a lethal and powerful technique. The user extends his right arm and fires a small, very fast, bullet-like beam of ki from his index finger or the palm of his hand, which barrels down and pierces through an opponent. It is able to be fired exceedingly quickly while maintaining precise aim. It can also be used in rapid fire.

Earth Cutting Row - is a powerful, very long blade-like energy beam created with two fingers. Able to slice through anything, when powerful enough, it can split a planet into two halves. It can also be directed at several opponents.

Eraser Gun - is performed by the user blasting a huge amount of energy from their mouth. It is a very swift technique and quite powerful with exploding and piercing properties depending on the way it is used.

Solar Flare - is a useful defensive technique, mainly used to make a hasty retreat. The technique is performed by the user flying in front of the sun and placing their hands close to the center of their face with the fingers spread toward their eyes. The user then calls out the name and a blinding blue light fires out that blinds everything watching except the user, since they are projecting the light. Because this is simply a flash of light, it will work despite any gap in power between the user and the target.

Galactic Buster - is an immensely powerful energy beam technique. The user forms two bright-green energy spheres in his hands and spreads his arms out in a form similar to the Final Flash technique. Then, he throws the energy spheres in the form of a massive wave of energy at the opponent, inflicting a huge amount of damage.

** New or Recently Trained **

Name: Twisted Ki

Type: Active Self Buff

Description: Twisted Ki is the ability formed up by Ericnox. It's rather simple in nature, as he tends to use it when he knows he has a long fight ahead of him. Much akin to Master Roshi's 100% form, he builds ki up within himself, his muscle mass increasing and bulking himself out.

The enlarged muscle mass slows his body down by a good amount. This ability however increases his physical attack power, ki use, and raw durability in exchange. Doing so allows him a good degree of attack and defense options, but cuts his speed well down.

This ability does have a second drawback as well. After it is activated, it does take some mental effort to use, but if disengaged (by one means or another), he must wait twice as long as when he used it to reactivate it. So if he used it for one post, disabled it, he would need to wait for two of his own posts to reuse it.

Theme Song (optional): To be added


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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:00 am

Kaioken is learned in the Other World, from King Kai... and the moves on the list are pretty much the only ones available at this time, so I would advise you to pick another one for the heck of it.

You can always learn a new move/technique of some kind in the actual rp, as long as you've got a mod's approval.

But for now, we're just using those off the list.

I approve of what you've written for the background - I for one prefer to reveal my character's behavior and all its little nuances in actual rp - it adds to the whole mystery thing. Very Happy Plus, they're saiyans - a military race, how flowery can their bios be? lol!

Everything else is a-ok, so if Gelth approves, I'll go ahead and move your app into the accepted OCs forum!
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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:05 am

I have no issue with the image or the background given to your character, in fact it's nicely written, and you work your character's personal history into the timeline nicely. However, I'd suggest that you pick another move for your techniques list before you are approved for now, as the only way to obtain the Kaio-ken technique would be to learn it from King Kai in Other World. But apart from that, good bio!
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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:36 am

Thank you both. I have added my final move, and shall pick up from there.
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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:44 am

Then we're good to go! Very Happy

Welcome to the game! Cool

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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:47 am

Thank you much! I shall probably start on the Saiyan's new world here in a few.
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PostSubject: Re: OC: Ericnox   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:56 am

Sure thing! Have fun! Very Happy

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