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PostSubject: Chardok   Chardok I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 08, 2013 7:21 am

Name of your character: Chardok

Race: Saiyan

Age: 35

Power level: 145,000.

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Background: Chardok was born on Planet Vegeta. His volatile nature was evident from the early days, and is matched only by his impetuousness. Chardok is first to volunteer for anything, from personal challenges to missions that no one else dares undertake. This has been the cause of many brawls, and many of these ended badly for Chardok. Of course, these defeats haven't changed his temper a bit. The one thing Chardok hates more than anything is other people's indecisiveness. Often he confuses careful planning and tactics for tentativeness, which made him an ideal target for all sorts of cruel jokes by his comrades. On the other hand, the superiors found his readiness to jump into the fray useful in the field, so he was given all kinds of tasks and rose through the ranks quite quickly. Now he occupies the rank of Sergeant, fully aware that it is unlikely he will advance any further. At least, that was until the word of the new colony spread.

In this he saw the chance of securing a rank for himself. When the call came to leave for the Delta-2814 he volunteered immediately. The last thing he thought of while entering the sleeping pod was "In your face, Beaner! When I come back, I'll have your hide!" The bearded face of Beaner, his immediate superior, leapt into mind. Always cautious, he had been responible for planetary missions and always took longer than Chardok would like. Triplechecking of equipment, calculating probability of victory, endless negotiations with the natives... It all made Chardok's blood boil. So he gave in to his nature. Every time. And Beaner had to rein him in. Every time. And there were endless reprimands. Every time. And they made Chardok's blood boil. But, every time an inspection came up, the high-ups found him and his unit crisp and at attention. Never a single flaw, always at the peak of their abilities, they were often presented as an exemplary strike force.

The main problem Chardok feels could have negative effect on his ascent is that... well, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed. Although a joker by nature, he delivers the punchline at precisely the wrong time. Often a couple seconds pass until he figures out that he is being taunted or joked with, and then explodes in the worst possible moment. This feeling of less-than-sharp wit disappears as soon as his mind enters what he calls fight-time. That is why he fears talking to others, especially his superiors, when it's not-fight-time.

- Dynamite Kick - is a seemingly normal kick. However, once it impacts the opponent, it releases a massive concentration of ki, resulting in a damaging explosion.

- Big Bang Attack - is an energy sphere technique. The user extends his arm and opens his palm, turning his hand up at a 90 degree angle (as if to signal "Stop"). He then powers up and fires a powerful whitish-yellow energy sphere at the opponent. This attack creates an enormous explosion upon contact.

- Eraser Gun - is performed by the user blasting a huge amount of energy from their mouth. It is a very swift technique and quite powerful with exploding and piercing properties depending on the way it is used.

- Power Ball - is a technique used by Saiyans to mimic the presence of a full moon. By combining ki with the planet's atmosphere, a ball of condensed Blutz Waves is created. Using this technique, a Saiyan can achieve the Great Ape transformation even when a full moon (or similar planetary body) is not present.

- Solar Flare - is a useful defensive technique, mainly used to make a hasty retreat. The technique is performed by the user flying in front of the sun and placing their hands close to the center of their face with the fingers spread toward their eyes. The user then calls out the name and a blinding blue light fires out that blinds everything watching except the user, since they are projecting the light. Because this is simply a flash of light, it will work despite any gap in power between the user and the target.

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PostSubject: Re: Chardok   Chardok I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 08, 2013 9:01 am

Looks good to me! Approved! Very Happy


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