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PostSubject: Deth Derby - The Stuntman Death Himself Hates   Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:24 pm

Name: Deth Derby

Race: Human

Power level: 10,000

Appearance: Deth is an attractive young male, who is most oft found clad in a purple jump suit, which is usually zipped up all the way, though it occasionally finds itself unzipped to about chest-level revealing a purple shirt underneath it. Deth's hair is unkempt and wild, apparently immune to the effect of 'helmet hair'. It maintains a healthy purple hue which matches his sexy purple makeup. He has four piercings, one just left his left eyebrow, two under his lip, the leftmost of which is connected by a chain to a piercing in his left ear. Deth has small, purple eyes. He's almost never seen without his trusted stunt-man helmet, which is white, with purple flames (what do you mean? That's not an octopus!) and a dark green visor.

Background: Deth was born in the big city, where everything was pumped full of life all the time. Never really one for an actual sparring match, he spent his youth impressing the young ladyfolk with his bravery in his active pursuit of attaining the ultimate stuntsmanship. For all his life he had worked on his body, attempting to make himself hard to break, for the sake of a good career. Deth took on his name, 'Deth Derby', as his stage-name and then actual name later on. He went on to become a professional stuntsman at the ripe young age of 15.

Of recently, he's learned a great deal on how to fight, having attained ki abilities though the intense training on his body. With it, he had perfected his technique, and became a defender of the people. Though most often it would never come to that, apparently the universe has other plans for him. Deth Derby, the Stuntsman that Death himself loathes, has become a fighter for the weak and innocent, not for the pleasure, not for the rewards, but for the publicity. Yes, Deth's becoming a defender is mainly to demonstrate what he can do to the public, and get super-famous, and hence hired more often. Of course, he's not all charm and good-looks like other fame-seeking defenders of the everyman, he has skill, finesse, and can sink a warship with a single kick, on accident. But then again, so could Nappa and his power level wasn't even greater than 9000.

Techniques: Name: Undead Body
Passive or Active: Passive
Type: Buff
Description: Deth Derby's unique technique that he developed himself to attain a status that is indestructible to most earthly means. Passively an enormous amount of Ki is built up inside of him, making him more durable than most warriors his level. This allows him to take blows that would put people with many times his power level to the ground, while being put to the ground as an equal with them. While this is a huge advantage in combat, it serves no other purpose, and ceases when he's unconscious (reactivating when he awakes). It also only applies to his body, so no clones he may make can have this buff active on them.

Also known as the 12 eyes technique or Quadruplication, is a technique in which the user powers up and splits into two, then those two split clones into four. Unlike the Afterimage technique these are tangible clones not just imprints left by speed. The technique’s primary weakness is the fact that it divides the speed and strength of the user by four, thus weakening the user. The user reverts back to the normal state once suffering a significant deal of damage.

Dynamite Kick
A seemingly normal kick. However, once it impacts the opponent, it releases a massive concentration of ki, resulting in a damaging explosion.

Wolf Fang Fist
A technique of rapid, charged melee strikes empowered by a wolf totem. It is a unique attack in that no energy is directly expelled from the user, rather ki energy empowers the strikes with incredible force. The technique is shown as a flurry of punches and kicks that seem much more effective and powerful.

A technique that allows the user to manipulate objects and other people with the power of their mind.

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PostSubject: Re: Deth Derby - The Stuntman Death Himself Hates   Thu May 02, 2013 11:46 am

First of all, loving the name, puns and everything!

Just give a bit more detail on two important things:

Why did Deth decide to defend people with his newly acquired abilities?


There isn't really a league of warriors that defends Earth. The Z fighters are very much on the hush hush and there's not really a sense of a Justice League being around or the like. Maybe he could just be a local superhero or something of the like? Like Mr Satan only with less pomp and more actual ability? lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Deth Derby - The Stuntman Death Himself Hates   Mon May 06, 2013 3:47 pm

Awesome. Edits established. He's a defender who is defending as primarily a publicity stunt, but has so much skill to back it up, you could get past the fact that he's only trying to get hired to do what he loves. (He doesn't like move stuntpeople, they're fakes who use safety equipment. Real men tank that 60 story drop, and walk off while the whole building explodes from how awesome that stunt was, of course without noticing the explosion at all because they hear so many similar explosions, and because they're looking forward to that bag of beef jerky they left in their cow.)

[shades] *explosions behind me* [/shades]
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PostSubject: Re: Deth Derby - The Stuntman Death Himself Hates   Mon May 06, 2013 4:21 pm

With all the adjustments out of the way he's looking fabulous and ready for approval! Let the other mods give him a once over for their approval and you'll be set if they feel everything is in order.

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PostSubject: Re: Deth Derby - The Stuntman Death Himself Hates   Tue May 07, 2013 10:05 am

Okay, all looks fine to me. You're approved! Smile
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